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Trifextra – Core

06 Jan

This post is a response to the weekly writing challenge from Trifecta.  Not only is this a challenge, it’s a competition.  One that comes with the rewards of triumph, increased fill viagra perscription feelings of self satisfaction and having your wondrous words featured on Trifecta.  Join in and be judged, you know you have the words to kick some literary bootay.

This weekend’s challenge:  core, mantle and crust

Crack through the crusty crisp.  So clever, so frail.  The middle of nowhere lies between very far away and just next door.  Spotlight on the light, the one you could not leave behind.

 
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  1. Lisa

    January 6, 2013 at 4:32 am

    I’m glad one of us is able to write still. xx

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:01 pm

      ONE of us, huh?

       
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    January 6, 2013 at 8:30 am

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  3. Draug419

    January 6, 2013 at 9:51 am

    “The middle of nowhere lies between very far away and just next door.” What a very true line (:

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:02 pm

      It just came out. But now that you say that, it does ring true.

       
  4. deana

    January 6, 2013 at 10:00 am

    This is really good! There’s alot of truth in your words.

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:02 pm

      Thank you!

       
  5. Jester Queen

    January 6, 2013 at 10:32 am

    I love the image of a light you couldn’t leave behind, a true love that comes with a lot of strings.

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:03 pm

      The truest I suppose, the internal light.

       
  6. Lumdog

    January 6, 2013 at 10:35 am

    I love the line, “the one you could not leave behind”. What a poignant thought.

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:03 pm

      Thank you

       
  7. Lance

    January 6, 2013 at 10:58 am

    Instead of saying “dude, it’s complicated”, you wrote gorgeous words telling me why. Everything worked. well done.

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:04 pm

      I kinda wish I had written dude, it’s complicated. Maybe a three word challenge?

       
  8. barbara

    January 6, 2013 at 12:13 pm

    so clever, so frail

    these are great descriptors. Thanks, Joules!

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:04 pm

      Thanks, Barbara!

       
  9. Linda

    January 6, 2013 at 3:31 pm

    Oh so pretty. Very Very nicely written! :D

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:05 pm

      Thanks, Linda!

       
  10. JannaTWrites

    January 6, 2013 at 10:38 pm

    Nice work! I like the middle of nowhere description..hadn’t thought about it, but it’s so true.

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:06 pm

      I love that y’all are pointing that out to me. It feels truer somehow.

       
  11. Sandra

    January 6, 2013 at 11:35 pm

    This is really beautiful. Thank you for these 33 words.

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:06 pm

      You’re thanking me? So sweet. xoxo

       
  12. Christine

    January 7, 2013 at 12:27 am

    I love it when the editors play! This is just gorgeous – it’s screaming to be read out loud. I really love the line about the middle of nowhere – I keep coming back to it and running it through my head. I will probably go to sleep thinking about it.

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:07 pm

      Maybe you’ll take it somewhere else. I love the idea of a thought inspiring another thought and so on,

       
  13. KymmInBarcelona

    January 7, 2013 at 8:40 am

    That next-door middle of nowhere. Whew. You nailed it.

     
    • Lulo

      January 8, 2013 at 7:07 pm

      Thanks, Kymm!

       
 

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